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RAVEN
written by Blackhawk07:08 PM 3/5/05I know the pleasure she has to give.
She's there, I'm so happy I live.
Her Gothic beauty is so enticing.
I can hardly know what I'm writing.
I love her blackened hair.
Her heart so full of bleak dispair.
Her eyes, as violet as blood is pure.
I'm really uneasy and unsure.
I love her pale and pallid skin.
As white as paper thin.
A dark angel looming in my eyes.
The light we both murder and despise.
We are both from another world.
I know I love this girl.
So softly she touches my skin.
It's a hellish romance.
An immanent sin.
She loves me so.
So many feelings I can't control.
I never felt this way before.
I have ended this damp hallway and found a Forbidden door.
I can't help but open, curiousity purging my Mind.
She is just like me, one of my kind.
The love I have to offer.
The urge.
The craven.
I give it all to her.
I have her, my Raven. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by a_girl_to_fetch13 (3-6-2005 - 04:01 PM)
| Wow. You're truely a talented poet. I really enjoyed this and will certainly be loooking into your other works. Keep writing.
-Holly- |
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (3-10-2005 - 08:52 PM)
| Wow i'm gothic so I know bout girls like this i'm in love with a very gothic chick and she is such an amazing person i'm obsessed with her |
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