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Breaking up...(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik12:43 AM 3/6/05Breaking up is a hard thing to do
especially with someone
as loving and caring as you.
I love you now
and always will
i'd die right now
if too much love could kill.
This breaks my heart
i'm sure yours too
but it's like i said
breaking up is hard to do.
Please forgive me for all this pain
but you need to think about it
the possibility of us meeting
is slim to none, i'd doubt it.
You need someone closer that you can hold
forever and a day
i'm not the best you can have
you're too good for me anyway.
I'm not sure if you'd believe this
but as i write this i am crying
because i knew this would never work
and we have to stop trying. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is the worst thing i've ever experienced...paul was a hard guy to break up with but i have someone better now....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Music&Romance (3-6-2005 - 12:46 AM)
| i really like this poem. i can relate in a way to it. love hurts...it may not kill on the outside..but i am sure as hell dying on the inside |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-6-2005 - 12:52 AM)
| Its nice but bogus sayin u have sum 1 better..thats harsh as fuck |
by DeaD_DyinG_PaiN (3-6-2005 - 01:22 AM)
| hun u learn in time that guys do nothing but bring pain nice poem though |
by sk8rchik (3-6-2005 - 01:46 AM)
| Cut_Wrist_Risk i said HE must have someone better than me |
by EvilAngel42890 (3-6-2005 - 03:42 AM)
| hey this is a really good poem!!!! |
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