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» Poem: Your Hearts Black Hole
Your Hearts Black Hole
written by XsouredXfaithX
12:48 AM 3/6/05
your lieing on the floor,drowning in your own blood
its everywhere:your clothes,the carpet,the rug
your life slowly leaving
this being the final pain it will be receiving
the world spins as you lie on the floor
making you wish to die even more
the tears in your eyes start to form
is this really what youve longed for?
its to late to turn back so it doesnt matter
the pieces of your soul have already begun to shatter
their jagged edges cutting your insides
slowly ripping apart your mind
which,right now, is the only thing you can hear
but its hard to understand, its no longer clear
you hear the tormenting shouts of everyone you knew
coming out with the blood dripping through
you feel the pain surging through your soul
but its being sucked in by your hearts black hole
your body feels completely paralized
the end is near you come to realize
you then pass out and wake up confused
your sitting in a hospital room
you figure out that you had failed at your suicide attempt
all you had wanted was for this pain to be exempt
so you lay there and think'theres always tomorrow.
until then, ill die drowning in my sorrows'


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
after one of the 3 times my sister attempted suicide, while she was in front of my slicing her veins apart these were the words that, i guess you can say, were going through my mind.

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by hatedandused (3-6-2005 - 07:21 AM)
That's sad.

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