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Freedom
written by speiamcial03:55 AM 3/6/05The tears roll down my face
As I run out of here
I could run for miles
Just trying to find my place
Someone help me
Help me find myself
I need someone to direct me
To tell me where to go
Right now im stuck
Stuck on the edge
With friends holding on
Trying to pull me back
I want them to let go
So I can be free
Free of everything
Free of fear
I would give it all to be free
I'm just waiting
For the right time to let go
When someone will be able to catch me |
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Another one of my many.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Elariel (3-6-2005 - 04:01 AM)
| Sad...that is just an emotion I picked up off this poem. I saw a women dressed in a flowing white dress falling from a clift into a void. I don't know why this poem cause this image though. |
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-6-2005 - 05:22 AM)
| It evoked emotion from me. Good job! |
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