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Just Fucking Help Me.
written by Josh_x08:16 AM 3/6/05Please just fucking help me
Someone, Anyone
Aren't my screams loud enough for you to hear me?
Should turn this up for you?
The silence got us nowhere
It all happened way too fucking fast
Locked inside my head
So many thoughts
None of which were good
I need someone
You just didn't know how to listen
Why the fuck wouldn't you listen
I screamed so loud
You never heard
I could hear you whisper
YOU CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I FUCKING SCREAM
I feel like nothing
Make me feel like something
It could be too late
Don't let this happen
Don't let me disappear
Fine!
Just leave me here to die
Just kick me in the face
The pain sends shivers up my spine
Now just go
I don't want you to see me cry
Nor do i want you to be here when i die |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (3-6-2005 - 10:29 AM)
| you need to talk to someone. i never had anyone to talk to when i was messed up so i wrote it all down. it works for me... |
by cool_riya (3-7-2005 - 10:05 AM)
| I know you didn't ask for comments but I think you ought to know that I really loved your poem.
Kind of matches my mood too.
Keep churning out such awesome stuff. |
by potty_dark_wiccan (3-8-2005 - 02:38 PM)
| I can relate so much... Well, if you ever need someone to talk to... |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-9-2005 - 05:37 AM)
| Iam not going to be like those other people who dont even know you and day I understand and relate. Because I cant honestly say I do. But I can say it sucks when no one hears you even when you scream. Read my poem silent screams. Please u2u me I love talking to people who might feel the same. Nice job-CaSsY |
by the_gloominous_doom (3-9-2005 - 07:27 AM)
| maybe they can't hear you over their own screams... |
by XsouredXfaithX (3-10-2005 - 01:46 AM)
| wow...you can tell there is emotion behind it all...maybe the person above me is right...they cant hear for their wons screams in hope youll here them. |
by GrEeNxdAixlUVerx (3-10-2005 - 06:14 AM)
| im sorry................. my life is fucked up to and im only 13..... im sorry ur life is like that. i guess everyone has something in common. nobody hears me i scream. anyway ur poem was great............ i loved it, u expressed ur feelings in a good way. props to u. |
by Ucantsaveme14 (3-10-2005 - 11:39 PM)
| josh..wats ur last name..cuz i think i kno u ..u sound like my friend josh..Neilsen |
by ShrtNSwt5989 (3-12-2005 - 04:05 AM)
| I am sorry you feel this way I don't know if you are just expressing you in writing or in cutting... but I think there is no reason to cut... I know you may think I have never done any of this so what do I know but I just know that its stupid to cut it doesn't take the pain away!! If you ever need to talk to someone you can talk to me!!
~Kris |
by slipknotlover88 (3-13-2005 - 01:01 AM)
| nice poem but alot of it sounded like it came from one of staind's songs ......forgot the name. |
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