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Daddys Girl Confessional(COMMENT PLEASE)
written by XsouredXfaithX08:44 AM 3/6/05i used to love you daddy
when you used to hurt me
id get over it and be happy
i was blind then but now i see
i saw what a real daddy should be like
if he really love his daughter
if he loved her he wouldnt fight
his fist wouldnt have to haunt her
its been going on since i was young
your beating and your hate
hurting me till you saw blood
no apoligies you would make
mom divorced you because of it
but then you got back together with mommy
you started again with no regret
and again came the haunting
day after day i had to hide bruises
id get worried when people asked questions
id simply make up excuses
little did they know it was all deception
for years this was the life i would lead
never letting out what i really felt
for years i would beg with you and plead
just to be hit with a belt
daddy theres a confession i have to make
i dont love you anymore
you put me through more i can take
you gave me no reason to love you for
now im going daddy, away from you forever
to me you were never a father
just someone i had to be with together
just think:all this because you hated your own daughter |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this goes out to you dad....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hurt_saralee (3-6-2005 - 02:02 PM)
| i really like this poem, you can really feel the emotion in it. if this poem is about something that really happened im really sorry that you didnt get to have a loving dad. i hope things get better for you. good luck. |
by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 05:23 PM)
| that was a really good poem, im sorry your dad treated you like that-im kinda in that situation...hope things are better for you now-keep writing x x x |
by mizypunk (3-6-2005 - 09:05 PM)
| This poem gave me goosebumps! It sad to hear someone write like this... im sorry if it happend to you... Stuff like this sould nver happen... Good luck and let me know if you write anymore, id love to read them! ^_^
good luck! |
by XpaperdollX (3-7-2005 - 05:04 AM)
| I love it...Great job as always..your amazing |
by devils_PornographicPerV (3-7-2005 - 06:27 AM)
| jess ;; i love you sorry i know your dad is a bastard but now you have your granny |
by xchEerhunnie0 (3-7-2005 - 02:25 PM)
| hey wow that was deep i'm sorry that your dad is a asshole anybody who does that is juust sick and you should tell him how you feel to make him feel like shit |
by miss_understood (3-7-2005 - 09:00 PM)
| i know how you feel if yoiu really went through this my dad used to beat me and starve me!! but that was in the past and i have learned to live with it!!
do i regret not telling any body
yeah
so any ways i hope no one else had to go through the pain i went through or that you had to eather |
by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 10:22 PM)
| wow, im sorry u had to go threw that. its an excelnt poem though |
by demented_vampire (3-7-2005 - 11:57 PM)
| im sorry for what you went through. very good poem. |
by xoxfoxyroxyxox (3-9-2005 - 02:14 AM)
| awesome jess....keep ritin... |
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