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» Poem: Eternity As One
Eternity As One
written by Wobble
01:08 PM 3/6/05
i want to love you for eternity,
even if we have our ups and downs,
but still you mean the world to me,
and with you i no longer frown,
your smile is all i need to see,
when i'm upset or feeling low,
your heart is filled with love for me,
i feel the same for you it shows,
we'll live our lives together as one,
and we'll love for eternity


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
when you someone so much, you want to be with them forever, and even when you die, you still go on loving them for eternity

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 01:10 PM)
wow, i love it

by AthiestAnarchist (3-6-2005 - 01:51 PM)
I know exactly how you feel. :) wonderful poem!

by Larn (3-9-2005 - 09:07 PM)
Yay! It's so good! One of your best! Keep it up!:D

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