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» Poem: someday
someday
written by geminichik711
05:00 PM 3/6/05
My heart weights heavy in my chest
I’ll try not to cry
I’ll do my best
You tell me not to worry about you
But I can’t help it, I just do
You’re my friend, how can I not
I stand my ground; stay at this spot
I will not let you ruin your life
I will stand tall PUT DOWN THE KNIFE
Suicide is the coward’s way
And I know you’ll thank me… someday


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» Comments / Feedback
by slipknotty_gurl01 (3-6-2005 - 05:30 PM)
that poem kicked ass!!!!!! it sounds like what my frend told me but thx u rok so keep goin

by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 07:11 PM)
i liked it a lot i was in your place cause my sister tried to kill herself

by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 07:19 PM)
Thank you for finally getting the point across to all the people out there who think suicide takes them away from all their pain. Your poem took the words right out of my mouth, thank you.

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