» Poem: The “yellow” brick road |
The “yellow” brick road
written by lone-poet08:25 PM 3/6/05O what a strange life we humans lead
Full of money and greed
All distraught and upset
No button to push that says reset
You must go one way or the other
There’s no refrain
If you make a mistake, you can’t go back again
So if you get lead astray
Just remember
It’s your destiny your there to stay |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Xx_mistik_xX (3-6-2005 - 08:27 PM)
i liked it, good written and good point keep it up. |
by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 08:28 PM)
I relly understand.......It's stupid the way we are sometimes we set rules on "How we should dress, how we should act and how we should think it's all kinda dumb!!!! ,BlackenedRose
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by BubbleButt (3-6-2005 - 08:44 PM)
that si really good....and true. Everyone should hear this. it'll makes druggys and all them look like even more of retards! ;) |
by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 05:00 PM)
hey honey! me again! i havnt left a comment 4 a while so here i am. what did i tell ya? ur gna b famous! evrybody here loves ur stuff! Its deep n it means sumtin difrnt 2 each person th@s wot makes it gr8. Keep ritin. I'll b seein ya! ;) xXx |
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