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Love
written by Broken Phoenix09:58 PM 3/6/05How do you know when your love is for real?
How do you know this is what you want to feel?
How could you do this to me?
How could you be so cruel to me?
Take a look from the outside and understand it all
Take a look from the inside and slowly watch it fall
You said your love for me was real
You said it was how you truely feel
But looking back now was it ever true?
And why on earth do I still care for you?
It dosent make sense but I'm still there for you
Even though everything we've been threw
Time still goes on and my song dosent change
Just a different remedy with a pinch of your rage
The stuff that goes on in this small little space
Would have that smerk running right off your face
Cuz no matter how innocent and pure they may be
When you look into their eyes the truth you will see
And every morning comes and leaves with the mist
And as the night calls it's you that I miss
But there's nothing I can do, there's nothing I can say
We've all got our problems and your in my way
I want to find out the truth of where did you go?
I want to figure out why it's you I know?
And there's nothing I change to stop the pain from coming
As these words flow threw my lips I can hear you humming
And as everything comes and as everything goes
I hope you will stop by to watch my shows
Cuz with every lonely day comes another lonely night
And as I sit in bed alone I am winning this fight
Cuz you never ever know what your going to see
So take a chance and relie on me
And when I look at the moon and stars at night
I can see your eyes shining ever so bright
Cuz somewhere
I know your there
Right under my nose
And everyone but us knows
How these storys go
So will you just come around so this will never end
And no longer will we have to pretend
That we're all alone faithless
And that we're nothing to really miss
But we all know that it's there right our nose
And for ever on who relly knows?
About everything that we're going threw
Todays a brand new day good luck to you
But I still want to know when your love is for real?
How do you know this is what you want to feel? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brokenxsmile (3-6-2005 - 10:01 PM)
| i love it! I love the emotions and the rhymes and the feelings... it's really really good! |
by the_gloominous_doom (3-9-2005 - 07:48 AM)
| this was amzing... i'm feeling the same thing rite now.. my ex did something that really hurt me, but he got hurt in the process too and i find myself trying to help him, becuz hes all i can think about becuz i still love him... it does really hurt doesn't it?
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by XsouredXfaithX (3-10-2005 - 01:35 AM)
| wow i dont know what to say...it was wonderful |
by Broken Phoenix (3-12-2005 - 04:03 AM)
by Perfect_couples (3-12-2005 - 08:05 PM)
| hey! i like this poem! it's very cute! |
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