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solemn (please comment)
written by lunasabrina14811:18 PM 3/6/05I sat there in a cold dark veil
and saw her reddened eyes
the depth of sadness from within
as she began to cry
a whisper from a sobbing soul
a comforting wave of hand
as silence came to settle in
i felt alone again.
i stepped out of this dark prison
and felt the hands of death
put on a calm expression
as they laid him to rest. |
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to my uncle
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| » Comments / Feedback | by doll_eyes (3-6-2005 - 11:24 PM)
| I really really liked it
Fantastic job
can you comment on mine? lol |
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