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» Poem: Thought *plz comment*
Thought *plz comment*
written by teejavus
11:01 AM 3/7/05
i thought i love her
but it is just a thought
it isn't her that i am in love with
but it is only the thought


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» Comments / Feedback
by BxOfShrpObjx (3-7-2005 - 12:22 PM)
short yet sweet... idk what its about but to me it reflects a love which you cannot pinpoint where it is going... *comment back*

by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 01:45 PM)
i thought u were sad but i just thought it wasnt u who was sad but it was the thought that made me sad hahhahaahahaha lol bye and take care ankana

by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 03:20 PM)
at last u have come back to reality

by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 04:22 PM)
cute! short and simple, but says so much -ali

by the_good_girl (3-7-2005 - 05:07 PM)
You are in love with LOVE.. not her.. its sweet that you know the feeling.

by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 06:46 PM)
hiya *tea*. youve been sending me links to these through yahoo. ive been dead the least months, in fact i still am. with pills to take and all. dunno how to say this, dont want to hurt you. dont expect me to love you, i cant love anyone. cold as a fish i am and scared like shit. they`ve been fucking me up too much, cant find myself anymore. if these werent meant for me then ... be happy and forget it. the poems are good. smile a bit and get better. take care please.

by sweetkitty73090 (3-8-2005 - 09:22 AM)
wow...that is sweet...I like people's peoms.

by Tigress92 (3-20-2005 - 10:44 PM)
you know your not in love with her that's good.

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