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Alcoholic Peronality Of Zver
written by nicole_lyndon05:59 PM 3/7/05I don't find it humorous
To watch you destroy yourself
I don't find it entertaining
To watch you kill yourself
But what you do is your choice
And the consequences feeling
I hope you lose your voice
Obviously you've lost your reason
Your whole respect ratio
Went down and won't come back
You threw it in a hole
And buried it with your facts
I don't know what I can say
You alcoholic freak
You need to go away
You don't deserve to be |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Emo-Child (3-7-2005 - 06:46 PM)
| this is harsh!!! some people can help it and im sure you are not perfect!! |
by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 08:24 PM)
| omg..wats rong with you?! alcoholism is a serious problem that people face-they should be helped through it not be told they're worthless!!! |
by nicole_lyndon (3-8-2005 - 03:14 AM)
| sorry ppl, i ddcate this poem to zver the idiot one |
by nicole_lyndon (3-8-2005 - 03:15 AM)
| sorry ppl, i ddcate this poem to zver the idiot one |
by zver (3-8-2005 - 04:32 AM)
| ladies and gentlemen i would like to cure ur worries and say that i am not an alchoholic but just a russian- nicole cmon u can do better then this look at maledeth he worte something and we gave himnm 3 pgs worth of material telling hom hes wrong and dumb( see zver much like her poem ) this was sad, ya i drink and what i do with my morals is my god damn buisness if ur tryign to help- thank u but fuck off if ur not fuck off cmon this is apthetic i read the other poem about me it was sad the rhyming was soo shity learn how to compose something with more or less normal non depressing meaning something that mkaes others laugh u dont lkaugh cuz u try and be pointlessly adultlike and mature and htink ohh how stupid to that i have to say look in the mirror darling ur the stupid one here and also here read most of my seroious poem ppl like em go look at "another day" that one was expecialy popular |
by nicole_lyndon (3-10-2005 - 04:48 AM)
| For you Zver: Why dont you leave us alone? If you don't like our works here then go somewhere else. We are not trying to compete with you. Our works are too much difference in a sense. I got mad at you coz you keep commenting in my works with bad words, if you gonna do that pls say it in a nice way. Im not used to it when ppl dis me. If you want me to respect you pls respect me also. Im not here to fight with you, im here to share my works to other ppl. So pls be nice to us and we will treat you nice. |
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