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Hidden Love (Comments are welcome)
written by True_Darkness07:27 PM 3/7/05I see, all the looks you throw,
At the guys in the next row,
And the whole time my heart is breaking,
I Hear, you laugh at every Joke,
Told by anyone who's not me,
But when its my turn to speak,
I choke on the words and come off like a freak,
And i crawl back inside my mind,
As it collapses around me.
I see, All the messages you Send to them,
But not me,
If only you'd look inside my desk,
And see all the letters where they rest,
But like so many thoughts in my head,
They will never be read. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-7-2005 - 07:29 PM)
| Nicely written I really like this one. I t shows how you can want sum 1 so much...but they ignore you and act like you're not even there. You did a great job Please view mine.-CaSsY |
by ~Anonymous~ (3-7-2005 - 07:53 PM)
| I like that one its really good it reminds me of many times I wish i could let someone know something that I cant tell them i know how you feel. We write kind of the same theme in our poetry you shoul read mine-~- |
by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 08:16 PM)
by weeping_violet (3-7-2005 - 08:42 PM)
| If its true then awwwww if its not true then awwwww all in all awesome poem and i can relate to it in my own little way lol keep writing! |
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