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breathing**plz comment***
written by sweetiepie89
11:06 PM 3/7/05
everything you say is lost out in the cold
a distant memory of the times ive been alone
i dont know you like i
thought i did
your making promises i know youll never keep
imagine the feeling of passion
are you seeing?
believin when were breathing
but why does it feel so cold?
constant feeling of pleasure are you hearing
the sound of our breathing
why does it feel so cold
i wanna share the thing with you i never told
but are we are the same wave on the same road
when are we to go?
if it's to be?
or maybe there's someone else out there for me
i won't let doubt be the last thing
i think about
i know this feeling dont last long
it's forever gone
you already lost my trust
when im over this
let the last thing that i breathe be you....


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