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» Poem: hrad time lovin u.(plz read me)
hrad time lovin u.(plz read me)
written by cutsoffaith
12:33 AM 3/8/05
VERSE:it's been a while,
since our first kiss.
but now,
somehow,
i've fallen into lonliness.
although ur here,
u seem so far away.
now i'm starying to regret our metting day.


CHOURS:i'm sorry that someone reched me first.
broke me in half, and stole my worth.
took my soul,
tore my hart.
and now,
i've made us fall apart.

END:it's not that i hate'
n e thing u do.
i'm just havin a hard time loving u.
I can't pull through.

VERSE: how long has it been,
that we've been togeather?
2 to 3 years, or maybe'
even longer.
but i feel hurt,
when i think of us apart,
but then i remember my empty heart.
it's too bad,
we used to look good.
but now it's over,
and we're through.


CHOURS:i'm sorry that someone reched me first.
broke me in half, and stole my worth.
took my soul,
tore my hart.
and now,
i've made us fall apart.

END:it's not that i hate'
n e thing u do.
i'm just havin a hard time loving u.
I can't pull through.

I'm sorry that it had to end this way,
w/ both our hearts sheding blood, this day...
i'll go away...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i don't know why i wrote this one.

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» Comments / Feedback
by intheblinkofaneye (3-8-2005 - 08:34 PM)
My gawd... That sounds exactly the way I'm feeling right now... S'wierd how sometimes you can relate to music the way people do. I like it a lot. Later. *~*~*Samwise*~*~*

by sexaefied (3-27-2005 - 06:16 PM)
thats beautiful

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