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I'll Dedicate It To You
written by brokenxsmile10:51 AM 3/8/05Most of my life I've been alone
Kept locked up in solitude
But you came and made my life better so
I think I'll devote it to you
My heart's been broken too many times
But you made it feel like new
You kissed it and made it better so
I think I'll give it to you
I wrote a little poem
A poem that was all too true
And now the poem wants to get published so
I think I'll dedicate it to you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Short, I know. I'll revise it later. Tell me what you think:)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 11:19 AM)
| Its....mushy.....really...really.mushy... but its good if you like that sort of thing.
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by ~Anonymous~ (3-8-2005 - 06:29 PM)
| I like it I think its great |
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