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A Broken Promise
written by bloodlyvalentine09:20 PM 3/8/05you promised me
you'de never forget,
you'de never let go
but you have.
you broke our promise
just like my heart.
you've taken everything
and torn it apart.
you left me alone
for the world to eat me up
i wish you were alive...
so i can kill you again
like youve killed me inside.
theres too many questions
i ask myself.
repeating and repeating...
waiting to find...
truth.
in a world of lies. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by not_alive_nor_dead (3-17-2005 - 10:03 PM)
| i don't understand this poem.. can you clarify this for me?? i would really apreciate it.... if you will.. read one of mine and then you could clarify this one fer me.. besides all that.. i like the way you put your words and the srtucture.. I LOVE IT!! |
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