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» Poem: Now you're gone....I wonder why
Now you're gone....I wonder why
written by demented_vampire
10:04 PM 3/8/05
I never thought you would be the one to do it,
I should have thought that over.
Now that you'r gone,
I have no one to use for cover.

You know you ment more to me than anyone else,
I guess you couldn't handle what you felt.
You would tell me everyday,
that you hated the cards youv'e been delt.

I wish you would have come to me for help,
Instead of commiting to the blade.
I didn't have enough time to clean up the bloody
mess you made.

If anything you knew you could talk to me,
you did't have to go.
Even though you'r gone,
I'm still here for you just so you know.

I know what kind of life you had,
you shouldn't have let it get to you.
Now all of you'r memories of us with our friends
are gone,
but you shouldn't have had to make you'r life
through.

I cry,
wishing it never happend that night.
Now I'm stuck in a never ending fight.

I pray that one day I will wake up and see you.
Maybe I can stop what you "were" about to do.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
About my friend when she commited suicide.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Sik_demon_chik (3-8-2005 - 10:11 PM)
Awww, dude!

by AthiestAnarchist (3-8-2005 - 10:36 PM)
That's so sad...I can relate because two of my friends did the same thing and every morning I think that I should see them walking down the halls...I'm so sorry this happend to you...

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