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» Poem: What i cant have(plz comment)
What i cant have(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik
02:02 AM 3/9/05
Thoughts race into my head
when i know you are around
I tense up when i hear you
I dont make a single sound

I've had these feelings for so long
but they've always been kept inside
today's the day i tell you
forever i cannot hide

I'm sure you'll laugh in my face
or tell everyone in site
that i've had these feelings for you
and i cry myself to sleep every night

I cry becuase i know i cant have you
for you i'm not even good enough
I'm sure i'll get over you one day
but i know it will be tough


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the feelings you get when u have a crush that doesnt know your first name or even that you exist....plz comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by AngelAshes (3-9-2005 - 02:06 AM)
nice :)

by brokenxsmile (3-9-2005 - 02:13 AM)
I know how you feel... I like this poem! keep it up

by dark_child07 (3-9-2005 - 04:35 AM)
i loved it!!!!

by TONK_PILLZ (3-9-2005 - 07:00 PM)
Very good.

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