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» Poem: Letting you go
Letting you go
written by Misery
04:20 PM 7/22/04
you don't love me anymore
you diss me like you would to a street corner whore

i eye my razorblade
and think of the few influences on me you made

if i could I'd cut you from my life
with my butchers knife

you were just a waste of time
you were nothing even deep down within my mind

you are immature and childish
and all you speak of is bullshit

so I'd letting you go and I'd glad, glad you're gone
now I find my friends opinions of you were not wrong

you tried to abuse me tried to use me
used words to decieve

bit I let you go
cause you're just a man, just a hoe...


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*Don't Judge if you don't understand*

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by Trapezium (7-22-2004 - 04:36 PM)
I understand... and i think this is a very good poem... i can relate to it but... not quite to the same extreme... well... good job

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