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Love is Crazy (PLEASE COMMENT)
written by shadowrestlin14
05:44 PM 3/9/05
I opened up my heart to you

It seems like you've put a hole straight through

You say you love me and I have no doubt

But maybe we don't understand what loves about

My love for you sure aint no lie

Can't help but sit and think and wonder why

Your personality, your eyes, your smile

makes talking to you all worth while

but it's like you think talking to me is a waste of time

so i guess i'll forget what i told you and pretend everything is fine

but that's a hard thing for me to do

because you say you love me and i love you too

i wish that you could be sitting here with me

i fucking love you don't you see?

i think its kind of weird since we were originally just friends

but just because i told you what i did doesn't mean this friendship ends


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i told this boy how i felt n he didnt even seem like it was nething it was like "yup another chick 2 add 2 the list" n that kinda hurt thats y im sharin this wit u. GUYS if a girl tells u how they feel atleast b nice enough 2 react or say u prefer to keep their friendship

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