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Vacated Brain (Comments are Welcome)
written by True_Darkness07:58 PM 3/9/05Longing for a place to stay,
Somewhere where i can hide away,
My brain isnt safe,
Controlled by those seeking to stop me escape,
So at the back of my head i bide my time,
Waiting to regain what was once mine. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its short i know. Not sure but i think it needs more
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ForeverUnseen (3-9-2005 - 08:00 PM)
| that's good! ^_^ It sounds kinda like the story of an actress from a long time ago who got sent to a crazy place even though she wasn't or something...twas sad.
Good job on it. |
by shadowrestlin14 (3-9-2005 - 08:35 PM)
| yeah it is kinda short but it is still really good. |
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