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on the edge!
written by lostinamirror09:35 PM 3/9/05Well here you are at the edge of the abyss...
at the beginning of infinity
heaven or hell an afterlife or a nothingness
forgiveness
or an eternity of suffering ?
Does anyone really know ?
Why have you come here ?
What do you need ?
To Find a Way to Live ?
or To Find a Way To Die ?
Here is a cup of pills
with the power of life, and death.
What would you like these pills to do for you?
Some of you want to take them to die.
But I ask you now... how many of these pills
would you take each day to live ?
To feel good, normal good, like everyone else ?
Stable, not depressed, even happy, but normal ?
These are some of the pills I take every day to save my life.
I feel happy, I feel pretty good, I feel normal.
I am grateful.
Lots of other people are doing it too. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I have been going through a really rough patch in my life i wrote the 1st half when i was really down and the 2nd half when i met this amazing guy who made me feel a lot better about my life and my situation! However, i lost him and Im left to feel the way i origonally felt when i wrote the poem!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Blackhawk (3-9-2005 - 10:40 PM)
| Love is not real. It never has existed and nor will it ever exist. |
by lostinamirror (3-9-2005 - 11:40 PM)
| I never said anything about love! The person im talking about is a really close friend who i then lost. They happend to have prevented me from taking my own life away! |
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