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lauren 2
written by hellhunk12:34 AM 3/10/05i coud stare in to her brown eyes for the rest of my life
my heart hurts
i feel hated and i feel like she stabed me in the stomach
but my love is still there for her
lauren i love u i just want u 2 kno that |
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lauren i miss u and i love u plz come bak
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| » Comments / Feedback | by pyrokiller55 (3-10-2005 - 10:35 PM)
| Thanks for saying that in your comment. Honestly I don't know how I can talk to you besides this. But I don't have AIM I have MSN. Your poem could be longer and maybe more of a lyric poem, not a lot but just a suggestion. (and I'm pretty sure I spelled that wrong.) |
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