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» Poem: The Pain of RED
The Pain of RED
written by Ucantsaveme14
03:44 AM 3/10/05
Many things come to mind..
The pain and agony i face.
Need the relief!
Need the feeling...
Of the Blade..
Goin over board..
To much!
Cant Stop!
Need more!
The stains on the blade..
Of Red...
Sinking through my shirt..
The many scars become painless..
The only thing that hurts is my heart!
The sight of the red
Makes me nervous..
But i keep on going!
More and more
Deeper and deeper!
The red line on my arm appears again.
Even the Deepest scars ...
Become painless..
Eventually..
Than over and over again..
My heart is broken..
And than my blade comes back..
Says i am here for u...
I help!
I dont think it does...
I think it does....
I donno what i think anymore!
But i cant stop now!
Its soo horrible ....
But..I NEED the Blood..
I nEed alot..
But many things i can not get..
Like a Better life...
So here i am...
Left with The Pain of Red....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Deppresing...I think of life..alot and how much it sux ass ..

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» Comments / Feedback
by youallsuck23 (3-25-2005 - 04:55 AM)
wow that was the worst poem i have ever read. you really need to shut up and get over the fact that mommy didnt let you out last night. moron

by (guest) (3-26-2005 - 01:34 AM)
what the fuck. are you a vampire or something? because that is the only explanation for such stupidity. kill yourself. we dont like you. :)

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