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Deadly Devotion
written by Blackhawk07:11 PM 3/10/05Deadly devotion.
A lost emotion.
I killed all who stood in my way.
I made my future darker every day.
I ran to her, with unbridled passion.
Deadly devotion.
A false emotion.
I cried on your shoulder.
Your hair catching raindrops.
I had all my love to give.
Now I have no feeling.
No reason or rhyme.
All the love inside me fading in time.
Deadly devotion.
A strong conviction.
I said, I love you.
I told a lie.
Those feelings have withered and did die.
I want an omen.
A sign for knowing.
Just to tell me if I should go or stay.
Deadly devotion.
With dying emotion.
Deadly devotion.
With all my motion.
Bloody tears.
When you're near.
Feed my rage.
A new dark age.
Kill my devotion... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Would anyone else agree that "love" is a false emotion and is purely and simply evil?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bluepixiebaby (3-10-2005 - 07:19 PM)
| Awesome poem. Dark, intriguing |
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (3-10-2005 - 07:26 PM)
| WHOA COOL THANKS FOR THE COMMENT AND FEEL FREE 2 COMMENT ON ALL OF THEM
IF YOU LIKE THEM OR IF YOU DON'T |
by kryppled (3-10-2005 - 08:41 PM)
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (3-10-2005 - 08:54 PM)
| hey do me a favor and e-mail me my e-mail address is morbidangelgurl@yahoo.com |
by thornyrosebud (3-11-2005 - 01:43 PM)
by depressions_slave (3-12-2005 - 09:29 AM)
| its so..... powerful, like there isn't a word for it, but its just sooo awesome, so unique, so capturing, you do have talent, don't waste it, or it will die. but like WOW, like, WOW, I don't know how to describe it, but WOW..... its just totaly awesomely good. |
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