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Saving myself from You
written by True_Darkness07:13 PM 3/10/05You put me in danger,
With every thing you do,
I need help saving myself from you,
Reality gives way cause your just too much,
And Everything you touch,
Withers in your hands and dies,
I know you dont mean what you do, its just you,
I know that your tired and lonely,
But you have to stop asking yourelf, If Only. |
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dont think its finished but here it is. any advice is welcome
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Elariel (3-10-2005 - 07:16 PM)
| YOur poem begins determined, like the speaker know what they must do, but in the end it seems more wistfull as if even though they know what must be done they don't want to do it. |
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