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Love knows no age..Right?
written by SilentScreamingScars09:17 PM 3/10/05Finally found the right one,
but she's the wrong age
Hurry cover her eyes,
She can't see all this pain.
Tell your mom you love him
Make her see its true,
Confess your deepest emotion
Because you love him you really do.
14, wrong age, too young.
Make them see its really love.
18, he grew up so fast
Filling his mind with doubt, say it'll never last.
They say your too young
Only adults know love
They say its impossible
But this feeling is undescribable.
She doesn't know heartbreak
He just wants sex
She'll learn from her mistake
When he moves on to the next.
Only adults know love,
Then whats this feeling she's talking of?
Foolness and Lust
Girl doesn't know love, she's not old enough.
They don't see what goes on
what happen behind closed doors
Yeah this feeling's love
Love and so much more.
Never will believe it,
Love between two "kids"
Now looking back upon it
She knows they should of hid.
Hid their feelings from the others
No one understands.
Puppy love is all it is,
Just hugs and holding hands.
Now she sits alone
Locked in her room very sad.
They ran him out of town,
That made her really mad.
As soon as the young couple spoke of love
The adults wanted them to part.
Tried to stop him from hurting her.
But they're the ones that broke her heart... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
don't you hate it when adults look at teens in relationships and say that its just puppy love and its not real? that we're not capable of that feeling..they don't know what we're feeling so they should just shut up and accept it.. plz comment and read my other poetry. thanks.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by someonetoloveme (3-10-2005 - 09:21 PM)
| That is so true... thats exactly what im going through right now ive found the right guy but he's too old so say my parents...
Nice job! |
by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 09:43 PM)
| Who is this person you speak of? Does he live near you? I know what you are feeling, I feel the same way. (If you don't mind sharing the name please do.) |
by SilentScreamingScars (4-3-2005 - 05:42 PM)
| Its pretty much about all my relationships.. but Mike's the only one that's 18 and me fourteen.. none of the rest are that old.. he lives an hour away and i can't see him.. |
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