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end and beginning
written by melons09:18 PM 3/10/05Seeing my life flash before my eyes
Its time to say my goodbyes
This may came as a surprise
But now its time someone dies
That someone is me
If you could see what I see
Then maybe
I could be free
Half the time we were depressed
All it was, was a contest
To see who could be the most obsessed
It’s hard to let go but it for the best
This tragedy has now ended
No need to be offended
I have been recommended
To someone that is splendid |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the end of something good and the beginning of somethign grate ... i hope xx
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lancer366 (3-10-2005 - 09:20 PM)
| thats wkd rite more and more and more and more and more im goona be her 4eva................. |
by (guest) (3-10-2005 - 09:22 PM)
| This poems great ure really tallented and i hope it is the start of something great xx |
by arnie (3-10-2005 - 09:22 PM)
| nice. hope ur new begginin is really nice for u xx |
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