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locked within herself
written by melons10:36 PM 3/10/05No place to run no where to hide
My request for freedom denied
To feel this rain fall upon me
So dark depressing and heavy
My eyes begin to melt
This is nothing I have ever felt
I feel no breath to my soul
I need something to make me whole
Just leave me alone I don't wont to know
The world it going by so slow
Why cant I see clear
I just wont to shout out for all the world to hear
I'm not the only one with a heart that cares
I'm not the only one with a heart that tears
I'm the only one who is locked within herself
I'm the only one who hates myself |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i feel like i cant get away from anyone not even myself i supose i had this coming im sorry
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lancer366 (3-10-2005 - 10:41 PM)
| hey this is really good not that im sayin ur others are crap i just cant be botherd 2 read thru every single 1 of them |
by (guest) (3-10-2005 - 10:45 PM)
| really gd poem, it's really good how you got the deep feelings across and got them to rhym, and the different ways you've brought it across are really clever, my imagination suks compared to that. |
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