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» Poem: it kills me(ppllzz coment-I ADDED)
it kills me(ppllzz coment-I ADDED)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
11:20 PM 3/10/05
it kills me that your gone
in some one elses arms
you walk by as my heart goes numb
Oh god i loved you first
oh god you were mine
tho i know you don't miss me
i think of you all the time
your ring burns my skin, and does worse to what i once called a heart
it s tattered and torn
and tarnished apart
Oh god is this happening
Oh god ican't breathe
Oh god my shoulders are breaking,please just let me bleed
This morning rings subliminally thru my mind
and how we spent together so much time
Oh god i loved you first
oh god how you were mine
i know that you don't miss me
But i think of you all the time
i'm in your arms in my dreams
as my tears flow like crimson streams
i find your words are lies
that poisoned,darkened ,and blackened my skies
Oh god how i loved you
oh god how you were mine
it kills me to know you don't miss me
i'v got to get you out of my mind
you've broken my heart twice now
i guess third 'll be the charm
I guess i'm supposed to cry now
and let you do your harm
i won't let you win this battle
of mind over heart
u added love to forever
and then tore "forever" apart
Oh god i was sure you loved me
oh god how you were mine
i know that you don't miss me
i can see it in your eyes
i would't miss me either
i burn at loves tru touch
I'm scarred and tormented
But i love you so much...
... ....., .................,
BUT OH YEAH, YOU DON'T LOVE ME
AND OH YEAH, YOUR DOIN FINE
MY HEART IS BRANDED WITH YOUR NAME
FOREVER CHARRED IN TIME
YOU'D LIKE ME TO SHATTER FOR YOUR OWN SICK PLEASURE
FOR MINE I'LL JUST BURN
THE PAIN I FEEL HAS NO MEASURE
BUT LIKE A MISTAKE I'VE LEARNED
I VE LEARNED NO TTO TRUST AGAIN
I WAS RITE ALL ALONG
MY WALLS WILL KEEP ME SAFE AGAIN
I'M COLD,NUMB,AND ALL
oH GOD I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME
HOLY FUCK WAS I WRONG
I KNOW THAT YOU DON'T MISS ME
I WON'T MISS YOU BEFORE TOO LONG
YOU JUST KEEP THIS GAME UP
CAUSE IN THE END ,WATCH,I'LL BE GONE


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
for ever isn't real
but love is ? THAT DON'T MAKE SENSE

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» Comments / Feedback
by A7Xgurl (3-10-2005 - 11:43 PM)
this was really good... except the whole "god" thing.. not really my thing.

by PsychoticJuggalo (3-11-2005 - 01:59 AM)
This poem is awesome! I really like it. I can relate to it a lot. Good job

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