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Red Curtin
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns01:32 AM 3/11/05Dance on the red river snow,
Pray as if you can't let go.
Feel the wind through ur feet,
and sing for your heart may stop the beat.
The red curtain blocks the rain from getting in,
so you may fear the ultimate sin.
His hands on yours,
push against you, with much force.
You quiver and peer,
past the red curtains... have no fear. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by crayola_sky (3-11-2005 - 01:36 AM)
| damn dude, that poem trips me out. its fuckin great! it just trips me. sortof makes me look at the big picture ya know? i dont know why, but keep it up!
your really good at communicating your thoughts.
~Sharon |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (3-11-2005 - 01:58 AM)
| Thanks thanks alot i guess it could make soemone look at the big pic. |
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