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HATE YOU FOREVER(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik02:08 AM 3/11/05As i lie in this dark, depressing room
the pain in my soul has started
as i lie in this dark, depressing room
i cry in pain, broken-hearted
I gave you my heart
you tore it apart
threw it on the floor
now i am forever sore
and in my soul
there is a hole
of where you were
you were the cure,
the cure to all that was bad
anything that made me sad
you took away the pain
and that kept me sane
but now instead of taking it away
you give me more everyday
now i dont care what you do
how could i have ever loved you?!?!?!
Forgive you never
i shall hate you forever!!
As i lie in this dark, depressing room
the pain in my soul has started
as i lie in this dark, depressing room
i cry in pain, broken-hearted. |
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ex's are assholes....plz plz plz comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sprawledacrossthefloor (3-11-2005 - 02:13 AM)
by ForEverLonley (3-11-2005 - 02:13 AM)
| ..deep poem...keep it up
*Renae/Renee¤ |
by *FoReVeR*BrOkEn*69* (3-11-2005 - 02:17 AM)
| woa whos name is renee.. min eis to :) how cool .. yea i know how guys-ex's are-expecially ones you fall in love with- IT HURTS im sorry |
by Cut_Up_Angels (3-27-2005 - 05:35 PM)
| unlike anyone else i DONT feel sorry for you im happy for you! im glad u n them r nomore since they had the balls to stopm ur heart into the floor they should fucking burn for what they did to u so i say im happy happy that that fucking bitch is out of your life and it was her loss.
*JEN*
~*~ it started out with a kiss how did it end up like this it was only a kiss it was only a kiss!!!~*~ |
by sk8rchik (4-2-2005 - 07:33 PM)
| Cut_Up_Angels it was a guy...but yea...thanx..i dont want ppl to feel bad or sorry for me..hes gone and i got someone new |
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