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NIGHT
written by mohawkkid88803:18 AM 3/11/05So many have died
im the only one left
dead leaves everywhere
this is a bloody reck.
screams of loved ones echo in the NIGHT
as the moon gos down up comes the light.
Smoke in the air, smells like burning flesh
ash so deep its up to my neck
strugle to get through but cant get a grip.
took to a secret room"get in" they say
door locked shut i whisper my prayers away
everyone is so close i can hardly move
in comes smoke that makes my grandfather puke.
my head getting dizzy i watch as people fled, they wount get far were all gonna be dead |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Punk_Goth_Girl (3-11-2005 - 03:35 AM)
| This makes me think of the old Auschwitz Nazi concentration camp and how they gased alot of people then burned some in the furnace.I'm not sure if that's what you were going for,though.Even if not,it's still very good. |
by AthiestAnarchist (3-13-2005 - 04:29 AM)
| really really good...I liked it a lot. |
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