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Drifting Apart(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik
03:24 AM 3/11/05
I've said it many ways
that i love you with all my heart
but the past few days
we've been slowly drifting apart

Apart from one another
apart from the love we share
and sometimes i must stop and wonder
do you really care?

Do you care about me?
you dont show your love
if you do it's hard to see
but you need to place me above

Above all the other girls
that you might call your "friends"
they've been breaking us apart
to make the relationship comes to it's ends...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is the story of me and my ex...after the break up we were friends but now...well i think you see...plz comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by CHATTYBIB (3-11-2005 - 03:53 AM)
luv it and i can relate

by (guest) (3-11-2005 - 04:33 AM)
It's great. I'm going through exactly the same thing.

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