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(i don't know, leave suggestions)
written by bluepi1ot
03:52 AM 3/11/05
I'll tell you one day
how I was a coward
how I was afraid
how I couldn't, why I couldn't

(..short pause for music about 2 seconds...)

I wish you were here
to guide and consol me
to hold me
to love me

I wanted you then
if even to have someone
to burn me, it would have been better,
would of' been better

I need you now
more than ever
I need you, I want you
I wish I could call you mine

(..Pause for music..)

I'll tell you one day
why I left you
lost in the words
I never said

I'll tell you when
I find the right words
so that we may
walk through the doors together

I wanted you then
if even to have someone to burn me
it would have been better
would of' been better
(...play for about 2 seconds after better, then slightly fade out to abrupt stop...)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sorry another song, its about a girl i once wish i knew. i hung on her every word, like the loser i am.

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by WitchyTianna (3-12-2005 - 04:19 AM)
Your not a loser. And that was a really good poem too.

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