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(haven't a clue, leave a name).
written by bluepi1ot
04:01 AM 3/11/05
Maybe, just maybe
together we'll overcome
what has outdone ourselves
dancing would not, oh no.
(short transitional pause for music.)
time is a distinct fraction
what is a second when we
have so few counting down
the moments till we fade.
(medium pause for music.)
and if without you i am
nothing then just kill
me now, cause i don't
want to be, anything.

Maybe, just maybe
together we'll overcome
what has out done ourselves
dancing would not, oh no.

without you i am nothing,
then won't you, why haven't
you, made me something,
make me anything, anything.
(short pause for music.)
maybe you, and me can
maybe we can but i hope
that we won't lose sight
of having dreams, sleep now.

Dream with me, i need
you to lie with me and sing
your lullabies, all the while
we'll dream in each others' arms.

Maybe, just maybe
together we'll overcome
what has out done ourselves
dancing would not, oh no.

Dream with me and
together we can be
anything or, or we can
be nothing at all, together.
( just fade it out, holding the note.)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about how i felt and still feel thats all i can say.


P.S. another song

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» Comments / Feedback
by WitchyTianna (3-12-2005 - 12:37 AM)
I think you should call it "Maybe" But its your song so you should name it.

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