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» Poem: afterlight
afterlight
written by bluepi1ot
04:18 AM 3/11/05
(intro music five measures l 1 2 l 123 4l 1 2 l 123 4l 1 words begin)
Believe me, it's not easy,
but, i have the solution,
it comes in a bottle and
it washes back the pain.

Drink it drink it down
down, and watch it all just
disappear, take it take it
take it all and maybe we'll be.
(Pause for music)
If seeing is believing, than your
believing in a lie, a lie without
a light, me, i had the light,
but i lost it in the thrash.
(short Pause for Music)
I walked into the darkness blinded
by the light, and to death i'd
sing if i wasn't so afraid of
the peace and the quiet.

I use the noise as my shield
and armed with the truth i can
sit and look with regret on the rest
of the world, humming to the beat.

If seeing is believing, than your
believing in a lie, a lie without
a light, me, i had the light,
but i lost it in the thrash.

The thrash is where we all end
up anyway, with or without a
light, it just slows the process
we all belong with the thrash.

If seeing is believing, than your
believing in a lie, a lie without
a light, me, i had the light,
but i lost it in the thrash.

To death i'd sing if i wasn't so
afraid of the peace and quiet,
shielded with the noise and armed
with the truth i hum to the beat. (Music fade softly for 2 seconds, sudden silence)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yea it's a another song, sorry. i'd been like living off bright eyes for aqwhile when i wrote this, and i think that it might be refleted alittle.

P.S. can't spell

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» Comments / Feedback
by darkmaster (3-11-2005 - 05:10 AM)
Cool song! you might consider naming it Afterlife because that is whare it sonds like your going in it!

by WitchyTianna (3-12-2005 - 12:43 AM)
I agree with darkmaster "afterlife" sounds right.

by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 06:51 AM)
HEY IT'S AWSOME AND I THINK IT SHOULD BE CALLED "LIGHT"

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