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black and red heart*
written by Trapezium02:24 PM 7/23/04I cried so much,
My tears could be rain,
I can't be with a girl,
Without it ending in pain.
Maybe they're not right,
They're not the ones for me,
But it happens so much,
Oh the negative continuity.
I am the anthem of,
Death and love intertwined,
I dwell on the past,
But eave everything behind.
I realise things when,
It's far too late,
When it is gone,
Then i fill with more hate.
My heart is black then i,
Find someone to make it red,
They hurt be again,
Oh the dread.
They give me false hopes,
Then they slowly drain them away,
Now i know forever,
They won't ever stay.
Destroying me is what they do best,
They love me then leave me,
It hapens so much now,
All of the girls now intimidate me.
Girls make my mind crack,
They just bring emptiness and fear,
They bring anything bad,
That will stay with you through the year.
They say you should always speak your feelings,
What about the loneliness and rejection,
What about the feling of dread when they say no,
What about the fear injection.
Sometimes i wish i was asexual,
That could get rid of my pain,
But my confusion would stay,
And i'd have to love again. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the pain from girls is almost unbearable... why do we have to live with it... sometimes we even die with it... sometimes we die because of it... there's too much hurt in this world... so if you tell someone you love them... just make sure you mean it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SuperBob (7-23-2004 - 07:04 PM)
| i really like this poem...and even though i am a girl...i know what u mean....and your footnote...well i couldnt agree more...too many people throw around love that i've always feared it myself |
by bathed_in_sin (7-25-2004 - 05:42 PM)
| well true love is worth getting hurt over. i'm sure you will love again you're too great a guy not to. the pain of a broken heart is the worst thing in this world, it has been enough to kill me. as a girl i can say that when i say i love you to someone i really truly mean it no matter what-forever. |
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