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Everyone Has A Someone
written by XsouredXfaithX04:38 AM 3/11/05dont just give up
theres nothing better than love
just find a different girl
who is the sunlight in your world
just dont give up completely
till you get this ill say it repeatedly
love is the greatest nothing is better
dont give up, dont put ur heart though a shredder
everyone has a someone |
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i wrote this for my friend
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 11:27 PM)
| Step up your work; don't use slang, unless you are using it for poetic license (in this case, it does not seem so). You have potential...you just need to work harder for your reader to see it. |
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