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» Poem: Becoming
Becoming
written by butter-fly
08:02 AM 3/11/05
The rooms spinning
The music's so loud
I slam the door not making a sound

Im so damn hot wheres the A.C
turn it up to 93
The anger is building up inside
it has no where to hide

I run downstairs scream outloud
'You f-ing bitch dont be so proud'
she stands their wearily then alerts into shock
screaming back at me
why is my mother so mad at me?

No one understands no-one cares
when i go out i always get stares
The worlds messed up
full of crap
God please i need a slap

Someone take me out of this trance
what can it be?
Im just some stupid girl hiding in a tree
and when its school i skip the lot
why should i pay to see them rot

Now im alone,
no one can see
my bleeding heart inside of me


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
describes the feelings of an angry un-sure pre-teen or even mid-teens

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (3-11-2005 - 08:46 AM)
and how old are you again?

by XxShadowedSuicidexX (3-11-2005 - 04:00 PM)
sweeet poem keep up the good work x_ jess _x

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