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» Poem: Breathe
Breathe
written by depressions_slave
08:25 AM 3/11/05
I can't Breathe,
The air, it won't let me,
This is what you want,
Isn't it?! You want me to die,
I know you never cared,
But now I know you HATE me,
Purly loathe me,
Why didn't you say so?
I can't breathe now,
Can you save me?
Will you save me?
Please?
Let me breathe,
I need to breathe.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
To all that hurt me, knocked me breathless with their words.

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by ForEverLonley (3-11-2005 - 03:38 PM)
whoa, all ur poems are liek....there Amazing, keep it up *Renae

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