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See Me Broken (Comments are Welcome)
written by True_Darkness11:47 AM 3/11/05See me all broken inside,
My shatered soul,
Visible on the outside,
See my heart torn in two,
Instead i now a have a huge black hole,
So it must have been you.
See my messed up mind,
You can hear it in my Voice,
Looking, but theres nothing left to find,
See me on the inside Dieing,
I would do somthing but ive got no choice,
And all i can think is i'll be Fine. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Randomly written no real point to it just had it in my head.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-11-2005 - 11:56 AM)
| very positive, if only we could all think like that. |
by (guest) (3-11-2005 - 01:45 PM)
| your poem is really great.it really speaks to me and I feel the emotion when I read it
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by ForEverLonley (3-11-2005 - 03:42 PM)
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-2-2005 - 09:25 PM)
| It flows beautifully I love it. -C@$$Y |
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