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» Poem: coments plz
coments plz
written by jude
11:55 PM 3/11/05
let me seatle down
and get my feet on the ground
let me stop swiling
and let the sky stop cruling
because i ve been broken down too much
i ve broken evrything i touch
i wanna stop
i wanna drop
but in a rhythmic tune my problem becomes a melody , a bulb in my drak room ... relief
like a summer ray of light that covers the sea
a pulse of plesure and happiness races over me
in the day and in my dreams
forever harnessing light to be open and set free
Jude
there i finally said ur name i dunno why i feel so ashamed but i''ll keep repeating it till the feeling is no longer strange
in a groovy tune so rhythmic that old familar feeling remains the same


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dman ... writen for my only love

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