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fading away
written by bleedblack03:22 AM 3/12/05i'm committing suicide
here and now
i've lost everything
and i don't know how
i've lost my will of life,
the urge to move on
i'm stuck in the past
the pain's not gone
the darkness stilll lingers
blinding my eyes
taking away everything
good in sight
stumbling every step
can't find the way
i'm trying so hard
but i'm fading away |
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not so good .. oh well .. comments
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| » Comments / Feedback | by BleedAwayThePain (3-12-2005 - 03:39 AM)
| This is a good poem, It's not long but it doesnt need to be. You tell what your feeling and no one can critize that.-Fade |
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