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» Poem: No, I'm not OK
No, I'm not OK
written by bleedblack
03:26 AM 3/12/05
let me fall into the night
drift into my death
fade into the dark
losing all my breath

couldn't grasp onto life
it just slipped right away
can't handle all this shit
no, i'm not ok

things will never change
it'll never be alright
i'm giving up and moving on
leaving with the night


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by xfadingmemoriesx (3-12-2005 - 04:14 AM)
it's good :).

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