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LoVe hUrTs
written by yorki_lass04:31 PM 3/12/05have u ever felt
that tightness in ur chest
the weakness in ur knees
and that ur better than the rest
have u ever known
tht sumfings gunna end
and yet u faught to keep it
till it sent u round the bend?
have u ever loved
and lost the very next day?
felt cheated out of love
with nothin more to say?
Have you ever laid,
in a bed full of pain
wishin itd gone different
and yet its still the same
have you ever had
that stabbin in ur belly
where ur gaspin for ur breath
and ur cryin at the telly?
Have u ever wished
ud neva felt these things
give ur life a chance
and see what it brings!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is based on feelins i once had!!! can u all give me feedback please!!! it would be appreciated!!! love to u all xxx
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| » Comments / Feedback | by CuTiE4LyFe (3-12-2005 - 05:48 PM)
by (guest) (3-12-2005 - 06:13 PM)
| im crying....im goin through this right now and its so HARD. i loved it tho |
by d4rk_p03t (3-12-2005 - 08:21 PM)
| i love this one your a really good poet |
by coach (3-17-2005 - 05:39 PM)
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