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Listen
written by psychojuggalette10:39 PM 3/12/05That's the problem
People don't listen
Listen to the words of the wise.
Listen to your heart.
Listen to the sound of a thousand beating drums.
They'll beat as long as someone in the world is there to listen.
Listen to your heart and then your head. |
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I know this one sucked, but I can't help it. I was in a weird mood.(PLEASE COMMENT)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Tanasa_bg (3-12-2005 - 10:41 PM)
| I'm not agree with yo' message, dude. |
by Tel (3-12-2005 - 10:47 PM)
| that doesnt suk...its the truth and if poeple dont listen then theyll never no |
by psychojuggalette (3-12-2005 - 10:49 PM)
by spaceageblues (3-17-2005 - 02:11 AM)
| As with alot of the poetry on this site, your poem is lacking structure and organization. However, I like how it is brief but direct and personal. |
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