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till I lost you(plz comment)
written by dark_child0702:59 AM 3/13/05I guess it is true you never know,
what you have till it's no longer there,
this feeling within my heart,
is too much to bear.
I cant stop thinking about you,
I can feel you all around me,
Even when you are,
nowhere to be seen.
I can hear your voice,
whispering in my ear like the wind,
I feel so much that is hard to explain,
where do I begin?
I can feel something magnificent in the air,
It reminds me of you,
nobody makes me feel,
as special as you do.
I never knew what I had,
till I lost you,
it made me realize that,
I am truly in love with you!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Anthony, this one is for you....I will love you till the end of time...even at 15, I know this!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by summerbaby (3-13-2005 - 03:09 AM)
by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 03:44 AM)
| it descibes how i am feeling about someone right now. i like it because i can relate but keep working on it. i definatly like the subject.. |
by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 04:03 AM)
| dude this is so true. It reminds me of wut im going through with my ex rite now. Ur really good! l8er |
by fairyleena (3-13-2005 - 04:50 AM)
| This is great! I dont think you should change anything maybe tweek a little. But dont change much its an awsome poem. |
by (guest) (3-14-2005 - 12:25 PM)
| ur poem is really good....we feel the same |
by silentscreamsecretscars (4-15-2005 - 09:07 PM)
| omg i think i just shed a tear...and that wasnt sarcasim |
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